Charlotte Jepps

 feedback lip-synching: 'more'  clock use y //////// ~"good idea" ~'"liked use of repetition"' n ///// ~"overkill" ~"use less"

  I think that the narrative worked well with the song choice especially with the theme of never ending and going in circles and the intertextuality of 'groundhog day' worked quite well. I think these elements together created a strong theme and message sort of. I think that I also include some good intertextual references especially with the font which I spent time on trying to match best with the Groundhog Day font and I think it payed off in the end. I also think the inclusion of puddles and waking up were good incorporations of intertextuality. I liked including the clock changing and I think that was probably the most obvious intertextual reference I think it being repetitive also emphasised the intertextuality and also went with the idea of groundhog day and going in circles, almost tying it all together. I also liked how I added in the idea of how its relevant to the present and lockdown being like groundhog day in doing the same thing every day and staying at home but a...